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The Story centers around Carson, a young man who meets Nikki, when he travels to Vancouver. They start dating and get pretty serious, at least from Carson’s perspective. Nikki, on the other hand just seems to be going through the motions of dating Carson with no real interest. He’s there, he’s interested, so why not pass some time going out with him? At least, that’s my interpretation of how she feels.
The sex scene John refereed to was disappointing but they were just having a “quickie”, LOL! That’s why it was so disappointing to the reader, there was no substance but I think that was the point. It demonstrated to me just how uninterested Nikki really was. Like John, I didn’t like Nikki either. She came across as shallow and uncaring to me.
John ended up liking the story but I could take it or leave it. It certainly wasn’t a “must read” or anything near that for me, it was okay. I liked the start of it the best, when it touched on Carson’s childhood. If you would like to read it, go here.
I remember John’s post and was considering reading the story. After your review, I might just pass.
Loni, perhaps you would have a different point of view of the story?
I like your theory on the sex scene.
John, LOL! Glad you liked it.