This story isn’t really about Natalie though the unknown narrator does focus a lot on her and how she views the world. The narrator, an teenaged female, perseverates back and forth on her relationships with her boyfriend, Natalie, and Natalie’s boyfriend, Billy.
Natalie is a what you see is what you get kind of girl. She seems to believe that people are mostly skin deep. The protagonist thought, “I’m not even thinking that she has Botoxed her emotions so she won’t ever need to do her face. The unknown protagonist tells us of her relationship with Natalie isn’t really as friends, more like acquaintances.
She thinks about their prospective boyfriends as well and thinks that Billy is more like herself. That maybe her and Natalie should switch boyfriends.
This is a difficult short story to review. I couldn’t connect with any of the characters at all and there was very little plot. It was really about a teenager trying to figure out life within her small part of the world.
This is the first piece I have ever read by Anne Enright but I do have The Gathering on my TBR. Maybe I will like her novel better than this short story. If you would like to read this story, you can read it on-line at New Yorker. I would love to get your take on this story, if you do read it.
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You know what, I’d be more interested in what my teenage daughter thinks of this one. I’ll send her the link …
Hmmm, the lack of plot doesn’t appeal to me. I’m not rushing to read Enright any time soon.
Wanda, I’d be interested in what your teenage daughter thinks too. LOL!
John,I don’t recommend it. LOL!
I’ve been curious about Enright, but have read mixed reviews of The Gathering. Maybe a short story would be a better place to start – thanks for the link!
JoAnn, if anything, this story may make you run far away from reading Enright. LOL!
This is Wanda’s daughter 🙂
Just got around to reading the story haha. I like having more time for things to develop, so im not a good critic when it comes to short stories, but I can say this one didnt impress me.
I find the narrator rather fake. It feels like the writer just slapped a lot of “likes” into her speech and made her kind of a wondering clueless in the hopes that she would pass as a decent representation of the average teenage girl. Her boyfriend has zero points on the way of character, leaving Billy and Natalie the only ones you pay attention to. Billy had a lot more potential as a character and he seemed to come off as rather bland considering much of what little plot there was rode on the situation between him and his parents.
I will say that Natalie, and the main character’s relationship with her, could ring true for most girls my age.
There were parts that were written well, sentences here and there that I read twice. Its biggest downfall is obviously plot, of which there was none. Some stories can survive without plot, but to do that they need complex characters to pull at you. You need to love or hate them enough to care about what happens to them, and you really dont care about any of these characters.
Thats why I hate short stories, lol. You basically have to make a reader fall in love with a character within the first few sentences
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Hi G, thanks so much for commenting. I was hoping you would. I have to agree with you on all points. The only one is you point on short stories in general. I also use to hate short stories. However, after reading a collection of them called Interpreter of Maladies by Jhumpa Lahiri, I changed my view. I loved that book. I have found that short stories are really a fine craft. Some authors have that gift but many don’t. There are authors who have the gift to make you fall for a character in the short amount of space they have.
I hope you discover a short story like that someday and don’t write them off copmpletely.
Again, thanks so much for taking the time to read the story and to let me know what you thought of it.
haha no problum 🙂
i do like reading short stories, i just dont like writeing them.
dont got that gift lol, always got in trouble for making them too long
I’ll check out Jhumpa Lahiri, thanx for the suggestion! 😀
The character sounds interesting
I loved reading your review and Wanda’s daughter review. I also enjoy Lahiri’s short stories – great rec!